Prelim 1

This is my first prelim that i have produced for my schools magazine.

Double Page Spread 3

I think that this double page spread is good as both pages link well with eachother. You can tell that they are on about the same story on both pages as it is all the same colour. Also the picture are of te same person on both pages.
The picture where i cuts off is good as it doesnt cut off straight down the midle of the persons face.
You can see the full image.
I think that by the image type you can tell this magazine is Hip Hop / Dance. I think this because of the title DISCO REVENGE and the clothes that the man is wearing. Also the way that he is standing, slanted on the wall.

Also i think that you can tell that the magazine is Hip Hop/ Dance because of the writing. As it looks bold and quite funky.
The way in which the writing is set out is on the left hand side of one of the pictures and underneath the other picture. I think that this is a good layout for the writing because the writing carrys onto the next page so if you would have to read on if you wanted the rest of the story.
The background colour i think is very good. As it blends in with the clothes that the man is wearing, also the writing on the background stands out very well because it is a light colour. This is good as the writing will attract the readers attention because it stands out well.
I think that the title is very good as it is bold and very clear to see. I think that it would attract the readers attention because it says that there is going to be DISCO REVENGE. This could mean many different things, so you would want to read the article to find out what it is on about.